100 word challenge EXTREME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

David was on a adventure to kill this massive ogar called the Exterminator he ruled all of the land. He was the strongest of them all. These were the weapons what David had. He had a sword,crossbow and a shield to protect him. The ogar lived in a cave deep in the forest. David went by foot when he found the cave it was so dark you couldn’t see the ogar then  David heard a noise he saw exterminator the blue skin.   They had a big fight David stabbed the ogar in the heart then he died

 

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge EXTREME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Well done Billy for doing the 100 word challenge! Can you read through your work to check if you have spelled Ogar right? WELL DONE! 🙂

  2. Good work billy you have good description and it gives someone an image in the readers mind. But double check over the second sentence.

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